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the sky chooses blue

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Oct 2005 · Edited 11 Jan 2006 · 1 comment

into the desert's shifting footing, follow me, cloister-resonant with voices, slippery slope'd overheard not understood fallen-down kneescrape clarity suddenly unhidden between whose lines is samsara

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[9] Caducus 12-Jan-06/9:18 AM Reply
love kneescrape clarity - prayer like.
Clarity.