Wonderful poem !!!!

Hey Mandy What's up?

-0-, but +1 for not being actual face poison

This poem is so bad it's bad. I'd rather look at homeless knees for 10 minutes.

This poem makes me want to be inside of a tree enveloped completely by tree matter and possibly choke on sap -8-

If native plainsmen considered this poem to be a 12th elemental construct of reality, I would annihilate their genetic lineage entire with a hydrogen bomb -3-

There is not one single causal strand of the many worlds multiverse that would not have a higher mean expected utility for its constituent beings in which this poem also exists -4-

Wtf is a tashlich mofo? I give it six. It's got more potential though.

/me farts.

Hmm.

I like your word play. The beginning was great... Then it got a lil tedious. I can tell the ending was an attempt to fit in with your title... Title comes last, don't be constricted by it. Six, but you got a ten in there.

A profoundly silly piece. I can't be bothered to dig up the original Checkliste, but this bulgingly stupid offering certainly ticks a few dunce-boxes: [X] Arbitrary line breaks [X] Clerical errors [X] Cliched imagery (gazing out of window, pits of despair) [X] 'Depression' words (putrid, wretched, darkness) [X] Devoid of alliteration or any such linguistic embellishments [X] Devoid of rhyme [X] Devoid of simile, reification or any such literary devices [X] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X] Drug reference [X] Melodramatic [X] Overabundance of ellipses [X] Pointedly unanswered questions [X] Self-obsessed -10-

It is a sad day that I must say that I miss my old nemesis!

Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)

Its been years..and i know making bacon can be slow all you comments all your slurs means nothing..as we know snow and sleet sunday morn family love to talk and eat its all about the sizzle and not the meat when will you all learn stop analyzing the repeat off we go, making the bun tomato and cheese its all about fun good bye for good..love you all :)

Thanks for keeping this forgotten place open and for giving me a lift.

I'm sorry th ebest is all you have. Better luck next time.

Not fond of the form. 7 for handling it and for saying something.

Please don't say Soylent Green in the middle of a plague.

Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.