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Crop Circle (Free verse) by Lenore
Cool and sweet,
My naked feet
Found dewy pathways through the wheat;
And out again
Where down the lane,
The dust was dimpled with the rain.
But in the lay,
I heard them say;
All quivering
With life, death and love;
A sound so dear,
The message clear;
"Be the phoenix not the dove".
My head was leant,
Where, with it bent,
A photographer over her instrument;
While all the night,
From vale to height,
Was filled with orbs in flight!
And all our dreams
Were lit with gleams
Of Alien delight.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.1
Weighted score: 6.05
Overall Rank: 1203
Posted: September 6, 2002 10:38 AM PDT; Last modified: September 6, 2002 10:41 AM PDT
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