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Mad (Haiku) by Lenore
Look what I can do! I'm sorry that you're ugly I peed a little

Up the ladder: Bagpain
Down the ladder: Go now if you want it.

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6542
Posted: January 31, 2004 3:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2004 3:13 PM PST
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[9] zodiac @ 67.240.211.168 | 1-Feb-04/7:03 AM | Reply
Welcome NanceXToo (if that is your real name)! So you take voting pretty seriously, eh? All very commendatory, I'm sure, but really! Giving a three to a haiku?! It's a HAIKU!! How is he ever going to beat forsaken if you keep doing this? We've got to stick together!
[9] Goad @ 80.132.186.70 > zodiac | 1-Feb-04/9:29 AM | Reply
I get the sense that Nance has a better than average eye for technique but somewhat rigid ideas what constitutes suitable subjects for poetry.

I thought this was wry and funny and vivid, and it rings quite true, but perhaps only if you've spent time being responsible for toddlers, and been self-aware enough to see yourself overreacting.
[5] T. Jonathron Remp @ 127.0.0.1 | 17-Oct-17/3:15 PM | Reply
This poem is so bad it's bad. I'd rather look at homeless knees for 10 minutes.
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