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Mad (Haiku) by Lenore

Look what I can do! I'm sorry that you're ugly I peed a little

Goad 1-Feb-04/9:29 AM
I get the sense that Nance has a better than average eye for technique but somewhat rigid ideas what constitutes suitable subjects for poetry.

I thought this was wry and funny and vivid, and it rings quite true, but perhaps only if you've spent time being responsible for toddlers, and been self-aware enough to see yourself overreacting.




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