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nentwined on Weather poem 13b by nypoet22 23 Apr 2020, 2:59 PM
I sure don't know. 13b?
nentwined on Birb by Aetius 23 Apr 2020, 3:00 PM
Poignant. I think I've been that bird.
nentwined on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub 11 Nov 2020, 3:25 PM
*hugs* here and there and anywhere.
impert&ent on I'll start by nentwined 15 Nov 2020, 10:40 AM
Crank up the old motor
nentwined on Year of the Cucumber by Dovina 23 Apr 2020, 3:07 PM
I stumbled a little at "feel"/"feel with"... flows better without to me. (why wallah vs. voila? If you were a cucumber? :) ) "no wanderlust" might be "no lust for wander"? More food for thought than I expected.
nentwined on Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues by pete 23 Apr 2020, 3:19 PM
definitely spoken.
nentwined on Everybody's Gone by impert&ent 23 Apr 2020, 3:21 PM
damn. nailed it for me right now.
Dovina on Birb by Aetius 23 Apr 2020, 3:22 PM
How do you know what he was wondering? He wondered at the window--that's reasonable I often wonder at the window
nentwined on coming out by pete 23 Apr 2020, 3:23 PM
cute :)
nentwined on Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp 23 Apr 2020, 3:24 PM
Torn between 6 and 2. Going with 2.
Dovina on time and clocks by nentwined 28 Apr 2020, 5:38 PM
I see a room of nerds caring about time for its changeable amounts and definitions. Across the hall nobody cares. Except the one who wrote that thoughtful graffiti, then painted over it.
Bill Z Bub on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub 19 May 2020, 2:34 AM
5am. No sleep. Got lost in the innerwebs. Are the spiders all gone? The weavers migrated?
impert&ent on Everybody's Gone by impert&ent 10 Jun 2020, 5:25 PM
Poemranker you are still here in spite of that lousy security exception nearly two years after I last visited. What is that about? How do you manage? Fucking ghost ship, wandering the highways, playing sneak attack on the pilgrim tourists Straddling the dusty road like some forlorn and has-been movie set Cast off from the realities of TV and film production Lonely ghost town ISO lonesome highway for romance and possible LTR.
impert&ent on Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent 14 Jun 2020, 7:28 AM
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again. This is the first 28 weeks.
impert&ent on Days of Silence (197-392) by impert&ent 14 Jun 2020, 2:38 PM
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
nentwined on Due by impert&ent 11 Nov 2020, 3:20 PM
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
nentwined on Firewoman by Richard 11 Nov 2020, 3:22 PM
Too much cliche in word choice makes it hard for me to involve myself in reading the poem. I believe there's a lot of emotion in this, but it doesn't translate/transfer to me.
nentwined on Lovesick by impert&ent 11 Nov 2020, 3:22 PM
Hah, yes.
nentwined on Fragmental by Bill Z Bub 11 Nov 2020, 3:25 PM
well that's a new error
impert&ent on Where are all the poets? by nentwined 11 Nov 2020, 7:04 PM
Likewise, this is a beauty. A cadence, a repetition, with or without rhyme. Good timing!