Re: Cannikin by Caducus |
Dovina 127.0.0.1 |
21-Apr-20/10:57 AM |
Hey Caducus, are you out there? This place is like a graveyard. I took a long trip and come home to a graveyard.
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Re: Jesus wept by amanda_dcosta |
Dovina 127.0.0.1 |
23-Apr-20/2:14 PM |
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Re: Weather poem 13b by nypoet22 |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
23-Apr-20/2:59 PM |
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Re: Birb by Aetius |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
23-Apr-20/3:00 PM |
Poignant. I think I've been that bird.
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Re: Year of the Cucumber by Dovina |
nentwined ::1 |
23-Apr-20/3:07 PM |
I stumbled a little at "feel"/"feel with"... flows better without to me. (why wallah vs. voila? If you were a cucumber? :) )
"no wanderlust" might be "no lust for wander"?
More food for thought than I expected.
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Re: Lazy Pindaric Ode Blues by pete |
nentwined ::1 |
23-Apr-20/3:19 PM |
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Re: Everybody's Gone by impert&ent |
nentwined ::1 |
23-Apr-20/3:21 PM |
damn. nailed it for me right now.
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Re: Birb by Aetius |
Dovina 127.0.0.1 |
23-Apr-20/3:22 PM |
How do you know what he was wondering?
He wondered at the window--that's reasonable
I often wonder at the window
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Re: coming out by pete |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
23-Apr-20/3:23 PM |
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Re: Life in the Z-Zone by T. Jonathron Remp |
nentwined ::1 |
23-Apr-20/3:24 PM |
Torn between 6 and 2. Going with 2.
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Re: time and clocks by nentwined |
Dovina ::1 |
28-Apr-20/5:38 PM |
I see a room of nerds caring about time for its changeable amounts and definitions. Across the hall nobody cares. Except the one who wrote that thoughtful graffiti, then painted over it.
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Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub |
Bill Z Bub ::1 |
19-May-20/2:34 AM |
5am. No sleep. Got lost in the innerwebs. Are the spiders all gone? The weavers migrated?
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Re: Everybody's Gone by impert&ent |
impert&ent ::1 |
10-Jun-20/5:25 PM |
Poemranker you are still here
in spite of that lousy security exception
nearly two years after I last visited.
What is that about?
How do you manage?
Fucking ghost ship, wandering the highways,
playing sneak attack on the pilgrim tourists
Straddling the dusty road like some forlorn and has-been movie set
Cast off from the realities of TV and film production
Lonely ghost town ISO lonesome highway for romance and possible LTR.
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Re: Days of Silence (1-196) by impert&ent |
impert&ent 127.0.0.1 |
14-Jun-20/7:28 AM |
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
This is the first 28 weeks.
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Re: Days of Silence (197-392) by impert&ent |
impert&ent 127.0.0.1 |
14-Jun-20/2:38 PM |
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
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Re: Due by impert&ent |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
11-Nov-20/3:20 PM |
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
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Re: Firewoman by Richard |
nentwined 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 |
11-Nov-20/3:22 PM |
Too much cliche in word choice makes it hard for me to involve myself in reading the poem. I believe there's a lot of emotion in this, but it doesn't translate/transfer to me.
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Re: Lovesick by impert&ent |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
11-Nov-20/3:22 PM |
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Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
11-Nov-20/3:25 PM |
*hugs* here and there and anywhere.
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Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub |
nentwined 127.0.0.1 |
11-Nov-20/3:25 PM |
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