nentwined
on Weather poem 13b by nypoet22
23 Apr 2020, 2:59 PM
I sure don't know. 13b?
*hugs* here and there and anywhere.
Crank up the old motor
I stumbled a little at "feel"/"feel with"... flows better without to me. (why wallah vs. voila? If you were a cucumber? :) )
"no wanderlust" might be "no lust for wander"?
More food for thought than I expected.
definitely spoken.
damn. nailed it for me right now.
cute :)
Torn between 6 and 2. Going with 2.
I see a room of nerds caring about time for its changeable amounts and definitions. Across the hall nobody cares. Except the one who wrote that thoughtful graffiti, then painted over it.
5am. No sleep. Got lost in the innerwebs. Are the spiders all gone? The weavers migrated?
Poemranker you are still here
in spite of that lousy security exception
nearly two years after I last visited.
What is that about?
How do you manage?
Fucking ghost ship, wandering the highways,
playing sneak attack on the pilgrim tourists
Straddling the dusty road like some forlorn and has-been movie set
Cast off from the realities of TV and film production
Lonely ghost town ISO lonesome highway for romance and possible LTR.
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
This is the first 28 weeks.
Poemranker was silent between February 15, 2019 and March 13, 2020. We had nothing to say for 390 days. I have filled that gap with one-line poems to make 56 weekly stanzas. We are now whole again.
I may just be out of practice, but I love this.
Hah, yes.
well that's a new error
Likewise, this is a beauty. A cadence, a repetition, with or without rhyme. Good timing!