Re: Obituary for the Moon by wilco	9-May-04/2:31 PM
Good song indeed. Unfortunately a song is not necessarily a poem, though it can be. This straddles the border between song and poem.
Re: 1 by Clockwork orange?	9-May-04/8:37 PM
Forced rhymes. You can't cross an i
Re: THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void	9-May-04/8:39 PM
Not a sonnet No vote
Re: Cliche by Blue Magpie	9-May-04/8:40 PM
largess should be largesse Very good -9-
Re: Billy Bob Jo by Inconceivable_Dreams	9-May-04/8:42 PM
doesen't grab me
Re: Migrating Storks by Blue Magpie	9-May-04/8:43 PM
Ten! Nuff said
Re: The folded ways your eyes cave by Shardik	9-May-04/8:46 PM
Jesus
Re: IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	9-May-04/8:47 PM
Not a Villanelle So no vote
Re: Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	9-May-04/8:47 PM
What the fuck
Re: Unmasking Wyverns by horus8	9-May-04/8:48 PM
Not bad
Re: The Errant Knight by Thyme	9-May-04/8:49 PM
Okay, I'm sorry but if you are younger than 300 years old this is slightly rediculous. However, points for the form
regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-04/8:52 PM
Can we say Prosaic?
Re: Totally Hair by TanHand	9-May-04/8:55 PM
Rediculous and forced rhymes
regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-04/8:57 PM
a satchel of shit
regarding some deleted poem...	9-May-04/8:57 PM
Jesus
Re: Fighting before bed by zodiac	10-May-04/12:27 PM
A form all your own, elements of the interlocking Rubyat, the Terza Rima and so much else. I have one solitary gripe: The penultimate line. The rhyme (...and did forget...) seems forced here. "And forgot" seems more natural although I understand sacrificing sense to sound. An awkward construction with an auxillary verb instead of a smoothe preterite seems out of place here. However that sole fault is not reason enough not to give you a -10-
Re: A Word by cuddlytiger17	10-May-04/12:58 PM
I find this to be, through no fault of your own, entirely too much like entirely too many other poems on this subject to give it anything more than an 8
Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	10-May-04/1:07 PM
Ann, you might want to try writing poems on a subject other than lost love. Teen romance is overdone by so many and in such a mediocre manner that it has become an automatic cliché. I'm giving you fair warning: Many other people on this site will be very impolite in telling you what they think of poems like this.
Re: Its raining by caitydee	10-May-04/4:08 PM
A bit sappy but alright.
Re: Bodies Bore Like I Do Too by fevriere	10-May-04/4:11 PM
What? Okay, after the 4th re-read I happened to get it. Not bad