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Migrating Storks (Sonnet) by Blue Magpie
Appearing in the southern sky each Spring,
as if by magic from the clouded sun,
they travel North on still and quiet wing
to make new life, where theirâs was once begun.
One by courageous one at first they pass
then two and three, and then in groups they come,
until the sky is speckled with such mass
of wonder that the watcher is struck dumb.
For hours at the border, passport in hand,
entangled in a queue I watch them go.
Who, flying free, can quickly cross the land
while I and my possessions wait below,
a silk wrapped bundle in a web of greed,
frustrated by the things I think I need.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2531
Posted: May 28, 2003 8:52 PM PDT; Last modified: May 28, 2003 8:52 PM PDT
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Otherwise succulentio.