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The Heart of a Man
The heart of a man
Is so simple and thin
It is so stubborn
That it never gives in
The heart of a man
Is so different and plain
It has no emotions
Towards the women he has lain
The heart of a man
Is so small and black
It has no rhythm
For the feelings it lacks
The heart of a man
Is so mischevious and crude
It has no manners
For it is always rude
The heart of a man
Is so protective and possesive
It has no doubts
That it is always obsessive.
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What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
Here's a tightening;
The heart of a man
Is so simple and thin
It is so stubborn
That it never gives in
The heart of a man
Is so different and plain
It has no emotions
Towards the women he's lain
The heart of a man
Is so small and black
It has no rhythm
For the feeling it lacks
The heart of a man
Is so mischevious and crude
It has no manners
and is always rude
The heart of a man
Is so protective and possesive
It has no doubts
That it's always obsessive.
Yippee, let's square dance to it. 10!
Thin like....etc.
Also 'laid' rhymes enough with 'plain' that you don't need to use the word 'lain'. When i read that line I laughed, and that doesn't seem to be your intention.
Also what does rhythm have to do with feeling emotions?
If this poem is about something you have experienced then write about what happened to make you feel this way about him.
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