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The Heart of a Man (Other) by Queen of Tease

The heart of a man Is so simple and thin It is so stubborn That it never gives in The heart of a man Is so different and plain It has no emotions Towards the women he has lain The heart of a man Is so small and black It has no rhythm For the feelings it lacks The heart of a man Is so mischevious and crude It has no manners For it is always rude The heart of a man Is so protective and possesive It has no doubts That it is always obsessive.

horus8 27-Jul-03/1:48 PM
Now I liked this.

Here's a tightening;

The heart of a man
Is so simple and thin
It is so stubborn
That it never gives in

The heart of a man
Is so different and plain
It has no emotions
Towards the women he's lain

The heart of a man
Is so small and black
It has no rhythm
For the feeling it lacks

The heart of a man
Is so mischevious and crude
It has no manners
and is always rude

The heart of a man
Is so protective and possesive
It has no doubts
That it's always obsessive.

Yippee, let's square dance to it. 10!




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