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Free verse № 58729

The Path of Least Resistance

by eliastemplar

Member since 2003 · Posted 1 Aug 2003 · 3 comments

The path of least resistance makes it's mating call to sweet submission Like the passive tempermental whine of engines lacking soil to grind So leave your patsy goals behind and ride your sheepish mount with pride.

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3 comments

[9] horus8 1-Aug-03/4:07 PM Reply
Well that's a happening piece.
[7] cleverdevice 11-Sep-03/1:17 AM Reply
Sheepish mount - Don Quixote almost. I never thought I'd see basic military training in a poem like this either.
[7] daniella 22-May-04/8:34 PM Reply
sounds good to me