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The Path of Least Resistance (Free verse) by eliastemplar The path of least resistance
makes it's mating call to sweet submission
Like the passive tempermental whine
of engines lacking soil to grind
So leave your patsy goals behind
and ride your sheepish mount with pride.
Up the ladder:
The Heart of a Man
Down the ladder:
Myopic Labotomized Hubris
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Posted: August 1, 2003 9:11 AM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2003 9:11 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2533 Comments:
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horus8 @ 24.126.113.154
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1-Aug-03/4:07 PM
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Well that's a happening piece.
Sheepish mount - Don Quixote almost. I never thought I'd see basic military training in a poem like this either.
sounds good to me
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