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The Path of Least Resistance (Free verse) by eliastemplar

The path of least resistance makes it's mating call to sweet submission Like the passive tempermental whine of engines lacking soil to grind So leave your patsy goals behind and ride your sheepish mount with pride.

daniella 22-May-04/8:34 PM
sounds good to me




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