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god damn P.D.A. (Free verse) by sir_heff The love that I see,
Is'nt given to me.
I see it all around,
Wile I lay on the ground.
I see some friends kiss.
I hurt in there bliss.
The hurt seems to stay,
And it wonât go away.
What am I doing wrong?
What the fucks going on?
Maybe my classmates where right,
When they foretold my plight.
I'm lost in my frown
Happiness all around
Itâs all that I see
As I hang in a tree.
Up the ladder:
Where's heaven?
Down the ladder:
Migrating Storks
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Posted: April 22, 2003 9:04 AM PDT; Last modified: April 22, 2003 9:04 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.537883 Overall Rank: 2530 Comments:
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Luv2write @ 205.188.209.7
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22-Apr-03/12:40 PM
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Ummm... I know how it feels when everyone's mating around you... but not hanging from a tree... so I can't really relate.
Yeah I know Exactly how you feel. -10-
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.
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