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god damn P.D.A. (Free verse) by sir_heff

The love that I see, Is'nt given to me. I see it all around, Wile I lay on the ground. I see some friends kiss. I hurt in there bliss. The hurt seems to stay, And it won’t go away. What am I doing wrong? What the fucks going on? Maybe my classmates where right, When they foretold my plight. I'm lost in my frown Happiness all around It’s all that I see As I hang in a tree.

BleedingRose 23-Apr-03/7:22 AM
As I hang in a tree. When I read this, and I certainly relate to it, i see myself hanging, with a noose slowly tightening its grasp.




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