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Totally Hair (Free verse) by TanHand
At my hair You do totally stare The sculpture you can't believe Is totally there It may very well scare You with its flair It may be the answer To your prayer For some totally hair Do you dare Using your hands as a pair To totally grope My totally hair? Or are your supposed urges Just hot air? Would you rather sit idle On a lawn chair And on your laptop Play solitaire? You might call me a poor man, But to be fair With my hair like this, I feel like a millionaire And if I am someday A millionaire Beware not to mess With my totally hair

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7040
Posted: August 20, 2003 9:26 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 9:26 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Aug-03/10:28 PM | Reply
Scoundrel, you could have at lisped quoted me.
[n/a] Rilke4ClosetLesbians @ 67.121.78.126 | 21-Aug-03/3:46 PM | Reply
I believe the term was "perfect"
[6] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 9-May-04/8:55 PM | Reply
Rediculous and forced rhymes
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 212.219.223.12 > Sasha | 10-May-04/2:59 AM | Reply
Ridiculous spelling of 'ridiculous'.
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