regarding some deleted poem...	10-May-04/4:18 PM
Excellently done Especially good rhymes
Re: After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac	10-May-04/5:19 PM
Very ephemeral, but still grounded in reality. Good, especially with the natural rhymes There's a palpable but faint feeling feeling here of Fitzgerald's: "A book of verses underneath the bough A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and thou Beside me singing in the wilderness And wilderness is paradise enow."
Re: Desire by mk32	11-May-04/3:15 PM
Comment on something, Please.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-May-04/6:33 PM
You sound like a combination between a drunk and a bad stand-up comedian
regarding some deleted poem...	11-May-04/7:01 PM
Oh, and, because this word has amused me so much: Bow'ls
Re: Highschool in My Head by MacFrantic	11-May-04/7:03 PM
Bow'ls
Re: What You Give by NoSage	11-May-04/7:04 PM
Bow'ls
Re: Style / Ffordd by Nicholas Jones	11-May-04/7:33 PM
Pam wyt ty'n sgrifennu'n gymraeg? Naill ai yn Gymraeg neu yn Saenseg, mae dy ysgrifen heb dull a heb pwynt. (Does ddim pwynt sgrifennu fel twpsyn) ond....Pam lai?
Re: Style / Ffordd by Nicholas Jones	11-May-04/7:36 PM
Samuel Becket dit qu'ecrire en français le permit d'ecrire sans style. Eh bien, je ne parle pas tres bien français, Donc il me faudra une autre langue seconde pour Mettre sa theorie à la preuve: Voyez-vous, il n'y a guère style là: Moins qu'en "Waiting for Godot"
regarding some deleted poem...	11-May-04/8:13 PM
Now I've got to hand it to you. Anyone who's second on the recent list with a ranker average of over 6 is worth something. Although I fail to see in this anything that would sound semi-decent only when accompanied by a guitar. Therefore: Bow'ls. But -10-
Re: Fourteen Years by impert&ent	11-May-04/8:26 PM
Though the last three stanzas are good, the "Sparkbook" appellations make me think this poem should be entitles "14 ways of looking at Bow'ls"
Re: Haiku Gymraeg by Nicholas Jones	11-May-04/8:44 PM
Mae dy haiku yn dda
Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones	11-May-04/8:48 PM
Try Trowsus yn Gymraeg
Re: Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones	11-May-04/8:48 PM
Try Trowsus yn Gymraeg
Re: Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/2:38 PM
This is a lot better! Is this an old one or a new one?
Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	12-May-04/3:49 PM
jesus
regarding some deleted poem...	13-May-04/12:57 PM
Yes, but that's what happens when you stay on this site too long.
Re: By Now by Lie2MePinnochio	13-May-04/12:59 PM
I like gnarly.
Re: Ze German Poetry by Stephen Robins	13-May-04/1:02 PM
I sink zat you vould be better usingg ze S for ze th sound at ze end off "youth"
regarding some deleted poem...	13-May-04/1:03 PM
Did you get copy-paste-happy? Did you get a siezure and hit ctrl-c and then ctrl-v repeatedly? -no vote-