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Free verse № 101406

What You Give

Member since 2003 · Posted 10 May 2004 · 1 comment

I've lived, loved and lost Counted the cost For all That I've bought. Ive calculated my losses My gains and my crosses Everything I've got. I've spent time on the good side, Done things I'd like to hide. But now I'm back. I'm living the good life, Whether or not it's given to me Taking all the challenges As far as I can see. Freedom is easy in this land where I live. But I'm just beginning to realize, It's not what you take, but what you give.

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[5] Sasha 11-May-04/7:04 PM Reply
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