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Bodies Bore Like I Do Too (Free verse) by fevriere The dark infatuates a dry mind. Sex's butterfly buzz flows and floods
And feels into the red error of my heart. Ignore my drying, dying love
and dance mindless to the wordless thud.
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Posted: May 10, 2004 2:27 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2004 2:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6277 Comments:
Sex is a butterfly but a butterfly does not buzz
and a buzz does not flow nor does it flood. 175 view(s)
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Okay, after the 4th re-read I happened to get it.
Not bad