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Bodies Bore Like I Do Too (Free verse) by fevriere
The dark infatuates a dry mind. Sex's butterfly buzz flows and floods And feels into the red error of my heart. Ignore my drying, dying love and dance mindless to the wordless thud.

Up the ladder: Prayer
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6317
Posted: May 10, 2004 2:27 PM PDT; Last modified: May 10, 2004 2:27 PM PDT
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[8] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 | 10-May-04/4:11 PM | Reply
What?

Okay, after the 4th re-read I happened to get it.

Not bad
[7] richa @ 81.178.254.233 | 11-May-04/7:06 AM | Reply
Sex is a butterfly but a butterfly does not buzz
and a buzz does not flow
nor does it flood.
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