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Bodies Bore Like I Do Too (Free verse) by fevriere

The dark infatuates a dry mind. Sex's butterfly buzz flows and floods And feels into the red error of my heart. Ignore my drying, dying love and dance mindless to the wordless thud.

Sasha 10-May-04/4:11 PM
What?

Okay, after the 4th re-read I happened to get it.

Not bad




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