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Open (Free verse) by baphomet
Open that brown eye We all know your a felching fiend, k-y jelly then it will be alright and... "Never mind DAMN ur tight" for, my pleasure no need to pay, on the ass or between the toes "get down on your knees like a top notch hoe." ------------------------------------------------------------------------ whoop there i blow.

Up the ladder: Lovely Independence
Down the ladder: An intolerable rash brother

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6349
Posted: November 21, 2003 10:37 PM PST; Last modified: November 21, 2003 10:38 PM PST
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[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 22-Nov-03/12:12 AM | Reply
Why does on top of ole smokey all covered with cheese, come to mind? maybe I remenber early childhood treasures/pleasures sun#2 nonetheles Touche! as you where er.. please.
[10] The_Third_Isis @ 24.126.116.54 | 22-Nov-03/12:13 AM | Reply
Why does on top of ole smokey all covered with cheese, come to mind? maybe I remenber early childhood treasures/pleasures sun#2 nonetheles Touche! as you where er.. please.
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