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Beggar (Free verse) by MacFrantic
Beggar Beggar
Tarred and feathered
Traipses through
The muggy weather
Lifts his hand to wave
A passer
Snorts and struts
To greener grasses
Far from rough
Untempered folk
Where babies bathe
In yellow yolk
Beggar Beggar
Mind a-whirl
Travels on
To something rural
Day by sunlight
Night by stars
Beggar longs
For boulevards
Carriages
And smoking barrels
Summer's eye
And Christmas carols
Beggar Beggar
White as ash
Buries coin
And burns the cash
Finds his life
Utmost befitting
Spurns the rich
Ignores their spitting
Home again
A beggar mourns
Couldn't save
The harvest corn
Finds a fate
Too many meet
Pitched and plumed
'Round Reaper's feet
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6275
Posted: August 3, 2007 2:04 AM PDT; Last modified: August 3, 2007 2:04 AM PDT
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I like the half rhymes you use.... but still think you could come up with something better than ...'travels on to something rural.'