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Free verse № 120662

Invisible Wounds

Member since 2005 · Posted 24 Feb 2005 · 6 comments

I have invisible wounds that noone sees but me. Wounds so deep that can't close. I wonder when these wounds will go away it's hard to say Because a new one opens everyday. Who will close these wounds for me? Will it be a friend or family? Can he or she stop my bleeding? Because day by day i'm wasting away and nonone hears or sees and even though a friend is here, the invisible wounds are still near.

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6 comments

[5] Dovina 24-Feb-05/8:36 AM Reply
Okay you have wounds, but that's about all it says. Fancy spacing and repetition cannot make it better.
[n/a] Stephen Robins › Dovina 24-Feb-05/8:41 AM Reply
You can be such a bitch.
[8] RION12 › Dovina 24-Feb-05/6:25 PM Reply
Man that was mean. Be nicer because you don't want some one saying that to you. If you don't care if some one says that kind of stuff to you then you should care.
[8] RION12 24-Feb-05/6:22 PM Reply
I liked it. I will say the truth and say it is not the best but it's good. Keep writing and you will get better at it.
[n/a] edpeterson › RION12 24-Feb-05/8:31 PM Reply
while we are saying the truth, let me just say you strike me as a very upstanding young man, albeit a slobbering epileptic simp
[n/a] Fearlesfan_04 27-Feb-05/4:00 PM Reply
Thanx for liking my poem peterson