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Invisible Wounds (Free verse) by Fearlesfan_04
I have invisible wounds
that noone sees but me.
Wounds so deep that can't
close.
I wonder when these wounds
will go away
it's hard to say
Because a new one opens
everyday.
Who will close these
wounds for me?
Will it be a friend or family?
Can he or she stop my bleeding?
Because day by day i'm
wasting away
and nonone hears or sees
and even though a friend is
here, the invisible wounds
are still near.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6281
Posted: February 24, 2005 6:56 AM PST; Last modified: February 24, 2005 6:56 AM PST
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