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Invisible Wounds (Free verse) by Fearlesfan_04

I have invisible wounds that noone sees but me. Wounds so deep that can't close. I wonder when these wounds will go away it's hard to say Because a new one opens everyday. Who will close these wounds for me? Will it be a friend or family? Can he or she stop my bleeding? Because day by day i'm wasting away and nonone hears or sees and even though a friend is here, the invisible wounds are still near.

RION12 24-Feb-05/6:22 PM
I liked it. I will say the truth and say it is not the best but it's good. Keep writing and you will get better at it.




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