The Errant Knight

Member since 2003 · Posted 13 Feb 2003 · 5 comments

Hither comes the errant knight Seeks the way to Camelot To uphold justice, truth and light Armour white and dazzling bright Gives the name, Sir Lancelot Hither comes the errant knight For Guinevere he shall fight Banish all, 'forget-me-nots' To uphold justice, truth and light Lovers clasped in dawn's pale sight To two others woe begot Hither comes the errant knight Unrequited, loves dark plight For the Lady of Shalott To uphold justice, truth and light Two destroyed and two in flight Love divine, love run amok Hither comes the errant knight To upholds justice, truth and light

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10 votes so far. Yours would make 11.10 votes so far

5 comments

[9] Ranger 13-Feb-03/12:46 PM Reply

Very nice indeed! 9

[7] <{Baba^Yaga}> 13-Feb-03/5:13 PM Reply

true to structure. content was a touch flighty.

[8] OneFingerAnswer 27-Jun-03/1:11 AM Reply

YAY! an 8.

[7] Sasha 9-May-04/8:49 PM Reply

Okay, I'm sorry but if you are younger than 300 years old this is slightly rediculous.

However, points for the form

[7] zodiac › Sasha 10-May-04/3:41 AM Reply

I find this comment especially funny, coming as it does from a 19 year old boy who spends most of his time pretending to be Catullus. You massively fail on yourself.