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The Errant Knight (Villanelle) by Thyme Hither comes the errant knight
Seeks the way to Camelot
To uphold justice, truth and light
Armour white and dazzling bright
Gives the name, Sir Lancelot
Hither comes the errant knight
For Guinevere he shall fight
Banish all, 'forget-me-nots'
To uphold justice, truth and light
Lovers clasped in dawn's pale sight
To two others woe begot
Hither comes the errant knight
Unrequited, loves dark plight
For the Lady of Shalott
To uphold justice, truth and light
Two destroyed and two in flight
Love divine, love run amok
Hither comes the errant knight
To upholds justice, truth and light
Up the ladder:
Charles and Eddie
Down the ladder:
For my wife
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Posted: February 13, 2003 5:52 AM PST; Last modified: February 13, 2003 5:52 AM PSTWeighted score: 6.0 Overall Rank: 1268 Comments:
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Ranger @ 213.1.45.6
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13-Feb-03/12:46 PM
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Very nice indeed! 9
true to structure. content was a touch flighty.
YAY! an 8.
Okay, I'm sorry but if you are younger than 300 years old this is slightly rediculous.
However, points for the form
I find this comment especially funny, coming as it does from a 19 year old boy who spends most of his time pretending to be Catullus. You massively fail on yourself.
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