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The Errant Knight (Villanelle) by Thyme

Hither comes the errant knight Seeks the way to Camelot To uphold justice, truth and light Armour white and dazzling bright Gives the name, Sir Lancelot Hither comes the errant knight For Guinevere he shall fight Banish all, 'forget-me-nots' To uphold justice, truth and light Lovers clasped in dawn's pale sight To two others woe begot Hither comes the errant knight Unrequited, loves dark plight For the Lady of Shalott To uphold justice, truth and light Two destroyed and two in flight Love divine, love run amok Hither comes the errant knight To upholds justice, truth and light

Sasha 9-May-04/8:49 PM
Okay, I'm sorry but if you are younger than 300 years old this is slightly rediculous.

However, points for the form




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