| Re: Being by horus8 |
10-Apr-04/6:36 AM |
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hi horus8. pretty good one here. and one that i have not seen before, but contains a good dose of wisdom and a dash of bitterness. well done .
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| Re: may 18 by Bill Z Bub |
10-Apr-04/7:24 AM |
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enigmatic, but fresh and a little dark.. . good poem though. wording is very fresh and appealing.
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| Re: Invasion by INTRANSIT |
10-Apr-04/7:27 AM |
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hahah, funny. Lingered toward the garage?? strange and, somewhat ineffectual word choice there. How does one linger toward something?
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| Re: The Unholiest Sonnet Ever by horus8 |
11-Apr-04/7:33 AM |
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funny. I have no fucking idea whom you are addressing with this one, but it doesn't really matter. ONe asshat is the same as the next.
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| Re: Once the moon turned me into a hairy vagina by horus8 |
11-Apr-04/7:35 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
11-Apr-04/11:06 AM |
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cloaks would be good, if you dont mind the potentially negative "hiding" connotation.
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| Re: Diary by wilco |
12-Apr-04/6:53 AM |
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i think it is pretty damn good. simple. ONly just shy of elegant.
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| Re: Everyone's choosing sides by zodiac |
12-Apr-04/8:16 AM |
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| Re: The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
12-Apr-04/10:19 AM |
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funny, but i have not been here long enough to know what the fuck you are talking about. go down on your bad self.
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| Re: Diary entry (edit) by richa |
13-Apr-04/6:28 AM |
I kinda like it. Quick sad statement on misinterpretation, that could easily be misinterpreted. LOL,. The wet leaf has no choice but to let go.
this is kinda funny in a way.
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| Re: Ballad for a bad Irish accent by zodiac |
13-Apr-04/6:40 AM |
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| Re: Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
13-Apr-04/7:43 AM |
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Jeremi B. Handrinos? LOL.
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| Re: ex by TheLegacy |
13-Apr-04/9:02 AM |
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pretty good write, but not a haiku. It seems like it might be a hook for a longer poem.
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14-Apr-04/5:39 AM |
I think this one is good. where are they...should be easy to spot, seems a bit clumsy.
And i almost did not click when i read the title, glad i did though.
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| Re: Under Cans by oftherealm |
14-Apr-04/8:05 AM |
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| Re: 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly |
14-Apr-04/12:44 PM |
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