poemranker ::ex by TheLegacy

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Haiku № 96833

ex

by TheLegacy

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Apr 2004 · 2 comments

you pretentious bitch, i would give everything i own for one more chance to throw our love away

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4 votes so far. Yours would make 5.4 votes so far

2 comments

[7] richa 13-Apr-04/7:02 AM Reply
5 syllables - 7 syllables - 5 syllables.

You don't have to stick to such a structure but the fact you did the numbers with words suggests a misconception.

The idea is ok but would be better as a throw away line not an entire poem.
[7] edpeterson 13-Apr-04/9:02 AM Reply
pretty good write, but not a haiku. It seems like it might be a hook for a longer poem.