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ex (Haiku) by TheLegacy

you pretentious bitch, i would give everything i own for one more chance to throw our love away

richa 13-Apr-04/7:02 AM
5 syllables - 7 syllables - 5 syllables.

You don't have to stick to such a structure but the fact you did the numbers with words suggests a misconception.

The idea is ok but would be better as a throw away line not an entire poem.




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