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Being Used (Free verse) by SILYLILGURL
I can't believe you did that I can't believe you would I trusted you with all my heart And you went and broke our trust Some say LOVE may last forever My love for last an hour People praised me about you And now I am believing all of them You used me For all of it Stupid me didn't realize it!

Up the ladder: your best friend
Down the ladder: Precious Smile

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.5
Weighted score: 4.8211956
Overall Rank: 10875
Posted: December 30, 2003 8:42 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 8:42 PM PST
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