on Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac
14 Apr 2004, 6:51 PM
Fucking hilarious that you chose sestina for the category. AHHAAHHAHHA.
on Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool
14 Apr 2004, 6:56 PM
HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.
on My Life by Fire_is_cool
14 Apr 2004, 6:59 PM
umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
on On A Cliff by colndodg
15 Apr 2004, 11:49 AM
rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 11:55 AM
I think it works well. reminds me a bit of "Growth of the Soil." Gold seed arcing against the sun. I really do not know anything about this, but I like the way you take me there. 8
on Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu
15 Apr 2004, 11:58 AM
HAHAHAHA. Lovely
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Apr 2004, 12:47 PM
this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
on Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Apr 2004, 12:48 PM
and i didnt even read the poem
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 1:35 PM
the structure of the physical words on the page makes this impossible to read.
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 6:09 PM
fuck, you need a helmet to eat yogurt.
on some deleted poem
15 Apr 2004, 6:16 PM
I have a mouse with a little scrolling wheel in the center. For a poem of this caliber, I can only vote by closing my eyes and spinning it back and forth an arbitrary number of times.
on horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II
15 Apr 2004, 7:07 PM
if you are going to write a pohm about sumbody , at lest try to make it funny.
on some deleted poem
16 Apr 2004, 8:08 AM
spin, spin, spin ......3
AWful
AWful
on Diptych by coffeespoons
16 Apr 2004, 8:55 AM
I don't care what category you put it in. I think it is great. I just love it.
on when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule
16 Apr 2004, 2:56 PM
you might find your soul buried beneath your language skills if you bothered to look for them. I think the lack of sensation left in the wake of pain is a theme that CAN be handled without cliche, but it takes flawless execution to do so. And a bit more imagination.
on I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8
16 Apr 2004, 3:25 PM
it appears the real play is acted out in the gallery.
on stranger by francis nor capule
19 Apr 2004, 7:19 AM
i think this COULD be good, but the punctuation is horribly distracting, as is the poor grammar.
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2004, 7:23 AM
pump don't work cause the vandals stole the handles is a rip off of a Dylan song.
what is a laut?? a lout?
what is a laut?? a lout?
on The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice
19 Apr 2004, 7:24 AM
could be good. I won't vote now, because this obviously needs to be edited.
on some deleted poem
19 Apr 2004, 7:29 AM
the body of christ. amen
the body of christ. amen
the body of christ. amen