| Re: Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac |
14-Apr-04/6:51 PM |
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Fucking hilarious that you chose sestina for the category. AHHAAHHAHHA.
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| Re: Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool |
14-Apr-04/6:56 PM |
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HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.
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| Re: My Life by Fire_is_cool |
14-Apr-04/6:59 PM |
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umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
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| Re: On A Cliff by colndodg |
15-Apr-04/11:49 AM |
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rife with cliche. cold as ice. forest for the trees. beg for forgiveness, pray for rain. I realize that this was probably intentional, as the whole poem is about "taking that leap" off the cliff, but still, it is hard to read so many without cringing a little. 6
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Apr-04/11:55 AM |
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I think it works well. reminds me a bit of "Growth of the Soil." Gold seed arcing against the sun. I really do not know anything about this, but I like the way you take me there. 8
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| Re: Metaphorically Challenged by Enkidu |
15-Apr-04/11:58 AM |
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| Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Apr-04/12:47 PM |
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this by far is the funniest page i have read on this site....yet. priceless.
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| Re: Tales From The Outhouse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Apr-04/12:48 PM |
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and i didnt even read the poem
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Apr-04/1:35 PM |
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the structure of the physical words on the page makes this impossible to read.
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15-Apr-04/6:09 PM |
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fuck, you need a helmet to eat yogurt.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Apr-04/6:16 PM |
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I have a mouse with a little scrolling wheel in the center. For a poem of this caliber, I can only vote by closing my eyes and spinning it back and forth an arbitrary number of times.
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| Re: horus8 accepts black cock for cash by King Abdullah II |
15-Apr-04/7:07 PM |
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if you are going to write a pohm about sumbody , at lest try to make it funny.
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16-Apr-04/8:08 AM |
spin, spin, spin ......3
AWful
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| Re: Diptych by coffeespoons |
16-Apr-04/8:55 AM |
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I don't care what category you put it in. I think it is great. I just love it.
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| Re: when do dreams fade? by francis nor capule |
16-Apr-04/2:56 PM |
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you might find your soul buried beneath your language skills if you bothered to look for them. I think the lack of sensation left in the wake of pain is a theme that CAN be handled without cliche, but it takes flawless execution to do so. And a bit more imagination.
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| Re: I Can Write A Wrong, But I Can't Right A Poem by horus8 |
16-Apr-04/3:25 PM |
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it appears the real play is acted out in the gallery.
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| Re: stranger by francis nor capule |
19-Apr-04/7:19 AM |
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i think this COULD be good, but the punctuation is horribly distracting, as is the poor grammar.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-04/7:23 AM |
pump don't work cause the vandals stole the handles is a rip off of a Dylan song.
what is a laut?? a lout?
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| Re: The Song of Summer Youth (II) by cleverdevice |
19-Apr-04/7:24 AM |
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could be good. I won't vote now, because this obviously needs to be edited.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-04/7:29 AM |
the body of christ. amen
the body of christ. amen
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