Re: Do You Like It by hotwire	19-Apr-04/7:31 AM
i can see it being a good song.
Re: Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco	19-Apr-04/7:36 AM
it is especially difficult for a reader of lyrics to imagine the beat, the cant, the rhythm of a song, when it does not rhyme. but, even as a poem, i think this is very good.
Re: The Flame by Fire_is_cool	19-Apr-04/9:04 AM
better than smoke inhalation, which is more than i can say for many of the others.
Re: Sissy Faggot by Shardik	20-Apr-04/7:15 AM
unbelievable. It reads like a page of my diary. I can SOOOO relate to this. Kewl. my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
Re: From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik	20-Apr-04/7:21 AM
not learned, earned.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Apr-04/8:03 PM
i think it is pretty fucking good.
regarding some deleted poem...	22-Apr-04/7:53 AM
great
Re: 8 or 9 by tadpole	22-Apr-04/4:31 PM
I love it. I would get rid of the double rocks in the first stanza, and remove one of the coins at the end, probably quarter. very good poem.
Re: The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>	24-Apr-04/6:11 AM
yawn
Re: Words that the Earth has to say… by nothingtoanyone	24-Apr-04/6:14 AM
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5
Re: jammin in the basement by xunitedx	24-Apr-04/6:16 AM
HOly shit that is horrible...it is so bad that it is good. 10
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-04/6:20 AM
the ending is disappointing, because the rest of it is so good.
regarding some deleted poem...	24-Apr-04/6:28 AM
hahahah.. that zodiac is funny.... He is not passionate enough about the matter to spend any more time on it, but plenty passionate to count up your titles that fit in the category of adj-noun??/? Unbelievable. but funny. Good poem. Also funny.
Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	24-Apr-04/12:19 PM
um, somebody gave this a 10 because that is where the spinning wheel of his or her mouse landed. Do you not know that all voting on this site is arbitrary??? Well, maybe not all, because apparently there are some not with the program. here's my spin....
Re: Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	28-Apr-04/11:20 AM
I think it is good, except for the fact that you do not degrade women enough. How bout a dose of misogyny tossed in for good measure, and maybe snuffle up some rails in there somewhere?
regarding some deleted poem...	1-May-04/12:11 PM
Deity, not diety. Unless "you" are obese. Pretty funny.
Re: the beale street mud festival. by wilco	3-May-04/9:17 AM
Very funny.
Re: All Alone by QuirkyWonder	3-May-04/11:05 AM
put down the pen.. and slowly back away from the paper. Pick up a chair and begin to bludgeon yourself until you can no longer stand.
regarding some deleted poem...	3-May-04/12:11 PM
summary: People are stupid.
Re: Natural Remedy by richa	3-May-04/3:17 PM
To taste if needs be...i aint no fuckin gardner, and maybe this phrase is an apt ending amongst gardening type folk, in the fold, but it leaves me a little limp, and desirous of something more satisfying.