on Do You Like It by hotwire
19 Apr 2004, 7:31 AM
i can see it being a good song.
on Moving Forward In Reverse (For Ann) by wilco
19 Apr 2004, 7:36 AM
it is especially difficult for a reader of lyrics to imagine the beat, the cant, the rhythm of a song, when it does not rhyme. but, even as a poem, i think this is very good.
on The Flame by Fire_is_cool
19 Apr 2004, 9:04 AM
better than smoke inhalation, which is more than i can say for many of the others.
on Sissy Faggot by Shardik
20 Apr 2004, 7:15 AM
unbelievable. It reads like a page of my diary. I can SOOOO relate to this. Kewl.
my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
my parents really never understood me neither. I hav not cut mysefl in 2 weeks, but its so hard.
on From Treehouse To Factory by Shardik
20 Apr 2004, 7:21 AM
not learned, earned.
on some deleted poem
20 Apr 2004, 8:03 PM
i think it is pretty fucking good.
on some deleted poem
22 Apr 2004, 7:53 AM
great
on The How To on Haikus by <Wankster>
24 Apr 2004, 6:11 AM
yawn
on Words that the Earth has to say… by nothingtoanyone
24 Apr 2004, 6:14 AM
last line is perfect...do to plain and simple stupidity....Genius! Unfortunately, the rest of it is endlessly unbearable drivel, and it is only 9 lines long. Well...Here goes the spin...5
on jammin in the basement by xunitedx
24 Apr 2004, 6:16 AM
HOly shit that is horrible...it is so bad that it is good. 10
on some deleted poem
24 Apr 2004, 6:20 AM
the ending is disappointing, because the rest of it is so good.
on some deleted poem
24 Apr 2004, 6:28 AM
hahahah.. that zodiac is funny.... He is not passionate enough about the matter to spend any more time on it, but plenty passionate to count up your titles that fit in the category of adj-noun??/? Unbelievable.
but funny.
Good poem. Also funny.
but funny.
Good poem. Also funny.
on AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
24 Apr 2004, 12:19 PM
um, somebody gave this a 10 because that is where the spinning wheel of his or her mouse landed. Do you not know that all voting on this site is arbitrary??? Well, maybe not all, because apparently there are some not with the program. here's my spin....
on Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer
28 Apr 2004, 11:20 AM
I think it is good, except for the fact that you do not degrade women enough. How bout a dose of misogyny tossed in for good measure, and maybe snuffle up some rails in there somewhere?
on some deleted poem
1 May 2004, 12:11 PM
Deity, not diety. Unless "you" are obese.
Pretty funny.
Pretty funny.
on the beale street mud festival. by wilco
3 May 2004, 9:17 AM
Very funny.
on All Alone by QuirkyWonder
3 May 2004, 11:05 AM
put down the pen.. and slowly back away from the paper. Pick up a chair and begin to bludgeon yourself until you can no longer stand.
on some deleted poem
3 May 2004, 12:11 PM
summary: People are stupid.
on Natural Remedy by richa
3 May 2004, 3:17 PM
To taste if needs be...i aint no fuckin gardner, and maybe this phrase is an apt ending amongst gardening type folk, in the fold, but it leaves me a little limp, and desirous of something more satisfying.