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jammin in the basement (Lyric) by xunitedx
Come on baby let me take you to The basement of this house where we’re gonna do Things you’ve never done before I’m gonna make you do ‘em more Pabst blue ribbon is the beer today If you don’t like it just go away So come on baby let me hear you sing I don’t care about rap and all that bling But if you wanna be with me Lets go down and watch the sea Crash into the golden sand I hope you really like my band But if you don’t that’s really cool When I sleep I sometimes drool So if you really wanna dance Let me teach you ‘bout romance I get chills when I hear you say You wanna be with me everyday Your face shines like diamonds in mines I couldn’t give you anymore signs To let you know I want you so I’ll never ever let you go So come to me and let me be The man you always want to see I’ll keep you safe all through the years I’ll even conquer all your fears Of spiders crawling in the dark Give me a chance to make my mark So come on baby hear me out I like the way you scream and shout

Up the ladder: I care 4 you
Down the ladder: Shadow's Stride

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.9284782
Overall Rank: 9367
Posted: April 23, 2004 6:17 PM PDT; Last modified: April 23, 2004 6:17 PM PDT
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Comments:
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 23-Apr-04/8:31 PM | Reply
AABBCC... rhyming is maddening - it really is.
[n/a] xunitedx @ 4.239.177.106 > Shuushin | 23-Apr-04/9:30 PM | Reply
i was drunk, and need some lyrics to sing so i could join in on the jammin going on in my friends basement.
[n/a] xunitedx @ 4.239.177.106 > xunitedx | 23-Apr-04/9:32 PM | Reply
plus, i think stuff that doesnt rhyme is maddening. it's called different opinions. i've never written anyting that doesn't rhyme.
[10] edpeterson @ 68.79.24.84 | 24-Apr-04/6:16 AM | Reply
HOly shit that is horrible...it is so bad that it is good. 10
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