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Everyone's choosing sides (Free verse) by zodiac
Thereâs that hint of smoke in the air again,
sharp-smelling as memory, a crackling
autumn-woods feeling that gets my hackles
shimmying like gasoline, like American
flags in our Nixon childhoods, witch
burning Halloweens, pitch-
forks and torches bustling and chimeric in
their own fugitive twilight. Seems
the centerâs feeling the squeeze
lately: lines are drawn; in the trees
rustling flame-colored around the square I can
see how nature is drawn inevitably to extremes â
not without a kind of sadness, for autumnâs fine
as any middle thing; and Iâd remain
here longer if I could, with the tang
of wet-leaf-burning coloring my dreams,
and want only an inch left here to hang
myself by my equivocating spine.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.4
Weighted score: 6.7
Overall Rank: 520
Posted: February 22, 2004 6:00 PM PST; Last modified: February 22, 2004 6:19 PM PST
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Cat Fight!!
Some good language in this.