|
|
 |
Everyone's choosing sides (Free verse) by zodiac
Thereâs that hint of smoke in the air again,
sharp-smelling as memory, a crackling
autumn-woods feeling that gets my hackles
shimmying like gasoline, like American
flags in our Nixon childhoods, witch
burning Halloweens, pitch-
forks and torches bustling and chimeric in
their own fugitive twilight. Seems
the centerâs feeling the squeeze
lately: lines are drawn; in the trees
rustling flame-colored around the square I can
see how nature is drawn inevitably to extremes â
not without a kind of sadness, for autumnâs fine
as any middle thing; and Iâd remain
here longer if I could, with the tang
of wet-leaf-burning coloring my dreams,
and want only an inch left here to hang
myself by my equivocating spine.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| | Graph | Votes |
| 10 |

|
5 | 0 |
| 9 |

|
3 | 0 |
| 8 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 7 |

|
1 | 0 |
| 6 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 5 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 4 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 3 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 2 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 1 |

|
0 | 0 |
| 0 |

|
0 | 1 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 8.4
Weighted score: 6.7
Overall Rank: 519
Posted: February 22, 2004 6:00 PM PST; Last modified: February 22, 2004 6:19 PM PST
View voting details
Comments:
363 view(s)
|
Cat Fight!!
Some good language in this.