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Under Cans (Free verse) by oftherealm
I used to be afraid to
strike, and trapped
them under cans,
whenever I could.
Fast they furtively
crawl towards their
welcoming dark asylums;
where they rest,
thinking they've won.
"Not for long!", I
say, as I haul out my
smashing clogs (two
great big chunks of
green neon rubber).
Across the desk and down
the wall.. KERPLACK!!
Oh gross! Another fine
mess to clean up..
Welp, one down. I
hope the others have
left the building.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6
Weighted score: 5.0715218
Overall Rank: 6591
Posted: April 14, 2004 6:53 AM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2004 6:53 AM PDT
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