replying on Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me by the codeine kid
23 Jun 2004, 7:33 PM
I do believe the Poemranker youth element is attempting to rise up against you.
replying on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 7:21 PM
I don't think you've upset anyone (and if they're upset about something like this they're too stupid to worry about having upset them). I, myself, am not the least bit upset. Everybody's searching for something and if that's what you're searching for then thats cool.
I'm guessing that you're talking about god'swife's comment, though. I don't think it was really the subjsct matter that upset her as much as the comment by Macfan. See, many people on here are of the mindset that you should not encourage those that should not continue to embarrass themselves by posting to this or any other poetry site. I include myself in that mindset (although I'm probably one of the ones who should stop embarrasing themselves). I just choose to not be as harsh as some other people.
and hey, mediocre's good enough for me. ;0)
I'm guessing that you're talking about god'swife's comment, though. I don't think it was really the subjsct matter that upset her as much as the comment by Macfan. See, many people on here are of the mindset that you should not encourage those that should not continue to embarrass themselves by posting to this or any other poetry site. I include myself in that mindset (although I'm probably one of the ones who should stop embarrasing themselves). I just choose to not be as harsh as some other people.
and hey, mediocre's good enough for me. ;0)
replying on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 4:21 PM
Depends on if you're female and how hot you are. ;0)
on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer
23 Jun 2004, 4:11 PM
How 'bout "skuldouggery".
on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer
23 Jun 2004, 4:03 PM
Get the hose Marge, them pasty Scotsmen done got in the trash again.
replying on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 3:48 PM
I think it CAN be a name. I bet if someone wanted to they could legally change their name to God (actually, I think someone did not long ago). If you wanted to, I don't see how anyone could stop you...other than....God...
on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina
23 Jun 2004, 3:46 PM
That's a nice little fairy-tale, but I don't buy it.
replying on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
22 Jun 2004, 2:46 PM
You're right, but I just didn't feel that it would benefit the poem to write a whole other stanza just to explain that she was always talking about how beautiful it would be in California. I figured the reader would just kind of pick that up (or just put their own meaning into it). I suppose I was wrong, but what the hell.
on Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer
22 Jun 2004, 2:29 PM
Who are these people? Why would using the word "nigger" give them "cred"? I'll give you a 3 because I'm intrigued, but you're going to have to explain more if you want a good vote.
on The Thinker by cedand1
21 Jun 2004, 8:02 PM
Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
on 5/22 by aburiedlife
21 Jun 2004, 3:36 PM
I don't get these people placing their own poems on their favorites list. You have a whole page of your own with all your poems listed there, all neat and tidy.
on "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE
21 Jun 2004, 2:35 PM
Good, but I'd like to see you expand it. The "soul doth yearn" thing is a bit (very) old school, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
on Cool In The Army by wilco
18 Jun 2004, 10:10 PM
What the sam hill?
replying on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco
18 Jun 2004, 10:01 PM
Really, isn't all poetry contrived crap?
on What's Poetry by Sasha
18 Jun 2004, 9:49 PM
Seems like something you just vomited up, but still not bad.
You've got to change this:
All somewhat whisky, won’t apply at all
If I don’t know who or what you is
You've got to change this:
All somewhat whisky, won’t apply at all
If I don’t know who or what you is
replying on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
18 Jun 2004, 1:42 PM
It's not about longing for California.
replying on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco
17 Jun 2004, 8:14 PM
I'm sure there is much more to California, but having never been there, it would be difficult for me to include all of that.
Peripheral can be used as a noun, though its generally more so in computer science. a peripheral is some sort of auxillary device like a modem or a printer (Thanks dictionary.com). So, thats the angle that I was using.
The rest of your suggestions are correct and duly noted. Glad you liked it.