| Re: a comment on Thoughts Asunder by wilco |
24-Jun-04/12:29 PM |
Thanks, that actually means a lot coming from you.
Peripheral can be used as a noun, though its generally more so in computer science. a peripheral is some sort of auxillary device like a modem or a printer (Thanks dictionary.com). So, thats the angle that I was using.
The rest of your suggestions are correct and duly noted. Glad you liked it.
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| Re: a comment on Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me by the codeine kid |
23-Jun-04/7:33 PM |
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I do believe the Poemranker youth element is attempting to rise up against you.
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| Re: a comment on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina |
23-Jun-04/7:21 PM |
I don't think you've upset anyone (and if they're upset about something like this they're too stupid to worry about having upset them). I, myself, am not the least bit upset. Everybody's searching for something and if that's what you're searching for then thats cool.
I'm guessing that you're talking about god'swife's comment, though. I don't think it was really the subjsct matter that upset her as much as the comment by Macfan. See, many people on here are of the mindset that you should not encourage those that should not continue to embarrass themselves by posting to this or any other poetry site. I include myself in that mindset (although I'm probably one of the ones who should stop embarrasing themselves). I just choose to not be as harsh as some other people.
and hey, mediocre's good enough for me. ;0)
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| Re: a comment on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina |
23-Jun-04/4:21 PM |
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Depends on if you're female and how hot you are. ;0)
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| Re: Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer |
23-Jun-04/4:11 PM |
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How 'bout "skuldouggery".
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| Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
23-Jun-04/4:03 PM |
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Get the hose Marge, them pasty Scotsmen done got in the trash again.
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| Re: a comment on The Riddle of Creation by Dovina |
23-Jun-04/3:48 PM |
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I think it CAN be a name. I bet if someone wanted to they could legally change their name to God (actually, I think someone did not long ago). If you wanted to, I don't see how anyone could stop you...other than....God...
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| Re: The Riddle of Creation by Dovina |
23-Jun-04/3:46 PM |
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That's a nice little fairy-tale, but I don't buy it.
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| Re: a comment on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
22-Jun-04/2:46 PM |
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You're right, but I just didn't feel that it would benefit the poem to write a whole other stanza just to explain that she was always talking about how beautiful it would be in California. I figured the reader would just kind of pick that up (or just put their own meaning into it). I suppose I was wrong, but what the hell.
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| Re: Niggers Don't Write Poetry by pain killer |
22-Jun-04/2:29 PM |
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Who are these people? Why would using the word "nigger" give them "cred"? I'll give you a 3 because I'm intrigued, but you're going to have to explain more if you want a good vote.
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| Re: The Thinker by cedand1 |
21-Jun-04/8:02 PM |
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Ok, I dig this one..and extra points for being from Tennessee. ;0)
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| Re: 5/22 by aburiedlife |
21-Jun-04/3:36 PM |
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I don't get these people placing their own poems on their favorites list. You have a whole page of your own with all your poems listed there, all neat and tidy.
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| Re: "She Phoned This Morning" by ARTIE |
21-Jun-04/2:35 PM |
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Good, but I'd like to see you expand it. The "soul doth yearn" thing is a bit (very) old school, but hey, whatever floats your boat.
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| Re: Cool In The Army by wilco |
18-Jun-04/10:10 PM |
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| Re: a comment on The Ocean Prefers A Sunset by wilco |
18-Jun-04/10:01 PM |
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Really, isn't all poetry contrived crap?
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| Re: a comment on Navy Pier by Doug |
18-Jun-04/9:58 PM |
Holy shit, he can leave serious comments. Don't you feel bad now, Doug.
Regarding the poem: Not bad, really.
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| Re: Chin-up by Rodavlas |
18-Jun-04/9:54 PM |
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Reading is masturbation for the mind.
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| Re: What's Poetry by Sasha |
18-Jun-04/9:49 PM |
Seems like something you just vomited up, but still not bad.
You've got to change this:
All somewhat whisky, wonât apply at all
If I donât know who or what you is
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| Re: a comment on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
18-Jun-04/1:42 PM |
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It's not about longing for California.
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| Re: a comment on West Coast Epilogue (Pseudo Triolet) by wilco |
17-Jun-04/8:14 PM |
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I'm sure there is much more to California, but having never been there, it would be difficult for me to include all of that.
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