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Chin-up (Lyric) by Rodavlas
Now I've set off on my own A burlap bag and a pair of rubber soles. I'm taking in a deep breath to relax To let it all out, to forget the past. I've got my ticket to the Big Apple I Turn around - there's noone running after... Ask aloud, but noones got the answers Just move on, no sense in chasing after The past, bury it deep into the ground. Chin-up, Chin-up, Move out, Move out. Nothings gonna change my mind Not a delayed flight, not even your eyes. "And what if she tries to call you up?" Grow-up, pick-up, and say good-bye. I know I'll make it through the nights alone... without her, with... out... her... Ask aloud, but noones got the answers Just move on, no sense in chasing after The past, bury it deep into the ground. Chin-up, Chin-up, Move out, Move out.

Up the ladder: The road to melancholy
Down the ladder: Send The Devil...

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.0
Weighted score: 6.5
Overall Rank: 690
Posted: June 17, 2004 6:04 PM PDT; Last modified: June 17, 2004 6:04 PM PDT
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Comments:
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.130.62.63 | 17-Jun-04/6:20 PM | Reply
Don't forget your listerine.
[10] zodiac @ 65.161.41.48 | 17-Jun-04/7:22 PM | Reply
Hey check out this action, homeslice:

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[7] wilco @ 24.176.102.131 | 18-Jun-04/9:54 PM | Reply
Reading is masturbation for the mind.
[n/a] Sasha @ 69.138.236.63 > wilco | 19-Jun-04/9:38 PM | Reply
That's actually quite thought provoking....which, in light of your comment, is very dirty
[5] nentwined @ 66.92.183.34 | 28-Jun-04/7:49 PM | Reply
somewhat catchy. a bit kitschy as well; the chin-up/move-out has a nice rhythm to it, though.
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