poemranker ::Chin-up by Rodavlas

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Chin-up

Member since 2003 · Posted 17 Jun 2004 · 5 comments

Now I've set off on my own A burlap bag and a pair of rubber soles. I'm taking in a deep breath to relax To let it all out, to forget the past. I've got my ticket to the Big Apple I Turn around - there's noone running after... Ask aloud, but noones got the answers Just move on, no sense in chasing after The past, bury it deep into the ground. Chin-up, Chin-up, Move out, Move out. Nothings gonna change my mind Not a delayed flight, not even your eyes. "And what if she tries to call you up?" Grow-up, pick-up, and say good-bye. I know I'll make it through the nights alone... without her, with... out... her... Ask aloud, but noones got the answers Just move on, no sense in chasing after The past, bury it deep into the ground. Chin-up, Chin-up, Move out, Move out.

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5 comments

[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos 17-Jun-04/6:20 PM Reply
Don't forget your listerine.
[10] zodiac 17-Jun-04/7:22 PM Reply
Hey check out this action, homeslice:

http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=no%20one
http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=noone
[7] wilco 18-Jun-04/9:54 PM Reply
Reading is masturbation for the mind.
[n/a] Sasha › wilco 19-Jun-04/9:38 PM Reply
That's actually quite thought provoking....which, in light of your comment, is very dirty
[5] nentwined 28-Jun-04/7:49 PM Reply
somewhat catchy. a bit kitschy as well; the chin-up/move-out has a nice rhythm to it, though.