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Free verse № 99714

The road to melancholy

Member since 2002 · Posted 30 Apr 2004 · 4 comments

Thoughts and possibilities appear like orange reflective markers along the side of the highway in the night. One every few feet sometimes curving in the darkness or straightening out in front, disappearing just as fast. There's no time to stop and pluck one off to look at the back and see if it's a winner. The best one can hope for is an off ramp or an extra wide shoulder to pull onto for some rest until the sun comes up.

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[9] deleted user 30-Apr-04/3:51 PM Reply
Just tryin' to get some rest, yep. Not bad.
[8] jessicazee 30-Apr-04/8:10 PM Reply
Third stanza doesn't need to be there in my opinion. Love it anyway.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> 1-May-04/10:47 PM Reply
I actually love when a writer can honestly talk about what they know.
[9] edpeterson 3-May-04/3:32 PM Reply
Great. So many hours have i spent looking at those fucking cones, or horses or even the white lines, counting, smoking...