replying on Sacrament by Dovina
17 Jul 2004, 10:34 AM
I've always wondered if those youth ministers are failed Catholic priests.
replying on Southern Mississippii Standstill by wilco
17 Jul 2004, 10:23 AM
That's exactly how it is down here. Except you forgot about the guy in the overalls playing banjo on the steps of the general store. We also like to sleep with our relatives, go to Klan rallies and drink moonshine.
In my experience, Electroman1979 is ultra-fundamentalist Christian and therefore has no tolerance for that which he percieves to be blasphemous. He also has no room for other interpretations due to his unwavering devotion to his religion. I'm sure he's not a bad guy...just closed minded.
on Drinking Knowledge by gregsamsa222
14 Jul 2004, 11:35 AM
I think I would like this better if I had read it before the Zin/ poem. Maybe you set the bar too high and now I want it all to be that good. Still, not bad and better than most of what I've read today.
on Zin/Enough/Things/Squeeze/Flow by gregsamsa222
14 Jul 2004, 11:32 AM
I was turned off by the length of this from someone I hav'nt read before, but now I'm glad I read it anyway. Some of them are better than other (particularly, I think, Zin, Enough and Squeeze) but overall, very good. I'm impressed.
replying on A Girl’s Climax by Dovina
13 Jul 2004, 5:03 PM
No, just don't think I've ever heard anyone actually say the word lad.
replying on A Girl’s Climax by Dovina
13 Jul 2004, 10:36 AM
lad?
on no email, no world by Prince of Void
12 Jul 2004, 12:22 PM
Is this written in English?
replying on A Girl’s Climax by Dovina
12 Jul 2004, 11:54 AM
Sure, except for the heart disease and not being able to walk 3 feet without gasping for air.
replying on A Piñon Limb by Dovina
8 Jul 2004, 2:49 PM
Perhaps we are the enlightened ones. Or, maybe we're just odd.
on A Piñon Limb by Dovina
8 Jul 2004, 9:06 AM
People are giving this a hard time, but I rather like it.
on Worst Sex Ever by Brittanyy
5 Jul 2004, 12:39 PM
naughty, naughty.
on Paradelle of Progress by Dovina
5 Jul 2004, 12:28 PM
I'm not sure about the form. I'll have to learn about it and will hold my vote until I do so.
on Translation by Dovina
5 Jul 2004, 12:27 PM
Yes, I like this one.
on Center Of The Universe by Dovina
24 Jun 2004, 4:03 PM
I like the thinking behind this but in liu of changing insect in the last line, I would change it in the line "If I crush an insect" to read If I crush a stinkbug or whatever. That would give the person reading something to visualize and, I think, drive your point home more clearly by stating "It was only an insect.
on The Sea (revised) by Dovina
24 Jun 2004, 4:00 PM
I'm glad you learned to like the sea. I'm going there next week and can't freakin' wait.
on Skuld Resurrected by SupremeDreamer
24 Jun 2004, 12:35 PM
Not that am bothered by it, but I think all the profanity takes away from it.