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Revision (Free verse) by Dovina
It wasnât the same this time.
The people were the same,
But the poets had changed.
Where before their nuances seduced me,
Now their insistence on form dismayed me.
Some had followed the tubes of formality
All the way to Deep6.
What Iâm talkinâ about
Is spirit and form,
The freshness of youth,
And the staunchness of age.
Of course, I consider myself young with spirit,
While the grad student is old with form.
A need for rules has replaced the fervor
Which we all walked in with,
As if fervorâs decline
Caused formalityâs control
Or as Bukowski said,
âAs the spirit wanes, the form appears.â
And I could add,
âPoetry dies.â
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Weighted score: 5.7395887
Overall Rank: 1825
Posted: June 29, 2004 8:57 AM PDT; Last modified: June 29, 2004 8:57 AM PDT
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