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Dan garcia-Black29 Jun 2004 Sounds like a lover's quarrel with this site. In that spirit, You're telling me not showing me. Who made that reprobate Bukowski god? In line 5 try replacing dismayed with repulsed (what is the opposite of seduced?).-9-
Dan garcia-Black29 Jun 2004