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Poetic Profit (Free verse) by Dovina
A cloud of smoke,
beery air and hamburger grease
waft out the door like a belch.
I slip inside
and find him at the bar.
Silk black shirt,
pearl buttons,
hair slicked back,
he tips a glass.
âWhat good was humility,â he says.
âwhen I was stuck in obscurity.
I wanted fame, to be humble in fame.â
âWell, youâre famous,â I say,
so tell me. Do you know the idea,
or just start writing
and let it come?â
âThe idea!â he says. âI always know what to say.
âLet me sing you the lyric.
to half of all successful poetry.â
And in a quiet falsetto he sings,
âSaturday I went to town
met the guys I hang around
had a smoke and a glass of gin
till she came inâ
Dovina
Is she beautiful, oh my
I see her and almost die
I would kneel in the street
My forehead on her feetâ
Dovinaâ
He slow-danced as he sang,
a figment-girl in his arms,
stroking her thigh,
then stopped suddenly.
âI donât think so,â he says sitting,
âNot for these guys.
They want to forget.
They remember their foreheads on feet,
and the pain of a swift kick.â
âIâm so lonesome I could cry,â he sang.
âThatâs the song they want.
Getting tears in my beer over you.â
I ask about free verse,
and he frowns.
âNobody's going to pay you, so why do it?
Get some cash for your trash.â
He promised heâd look at my poems,
said I could bring them around sometime.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.75
Weighted score: 5.7395887
Overall Rank: 1831
Posted: January 3, 2005 4:13 PM PST; Last modified: January 3, 2005 4:13 PM PST
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