poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Poetic Profit by Dovina.

richa4 Jan 2005

Following your explanation I am left wondering exactly why a belch is the wrong word to use as the verb but correct to use as a simile of said verb. Is it the door that makes all the difference? If not how about a modification of the simile.

'waft like a Lady's eructation' perhaps?