| Re: Are You O.K.? by sonawrote |
28-Jan-04/8:27 PM |
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then in that case I was ahead of myself....it was written when I was 14 in Chem class.....board meetings were 10 years away.....
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| Re: missin' you by clumseYdaiseY |
30-Jan-04/8:53 PM |
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we've all been there once
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| Re: You Know Not by broken_wing11 |
30-Jan-04/9:06 PM |
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I like it but feel after 2 readings that there is a small suggestion....add the word time after night in 8th line...flow would be smoother
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| Re: My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote |
7-Feb-04/10:06 PM |
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don't care if no one likes this....just had to get this day off my chest....
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
7-Feb-04/10:18 PM |
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was there today...almost...thanks Crystal
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| Re: Shower by unouluvme |
2-Apr-04/7:26 PM |
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I give a smirk ....so many of us...
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| Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
2-Apr-04/7:29 PM |
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| Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_ |
18-Apr-05/8:57 PM |
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Finally, someone on this site with a brain & talent,the only nasty comments U will get is from those you speak of.....deeply enjoyed this one, you should be doing stand up though.....Def poetry Jam would love you....Ella
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| Re: Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien |
18-Apr-05/9:02 PM |
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keep it up....I'll always read what u got cummin'
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| Re: 15 Minute poem by Damien |
18-Apr-05/9:05 PM |
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Hey Damien, nice piece, have u ever considered stand up in NY? I could set u up w/ some people that would love ya....set u in motion to where u should be already on TV...get in touch ellasona@yahoo.com
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| Re: Gaping Hole by sonawrote |
20-Apr-05/7:17 PM |
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I edited the title since some of the MORONS that read here are trying to be comedians.....and doing a pathetic job at it
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| Re: A new leaf by Damien |
20-Apr-05/7:20 PM |
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keep going Damien.....chin up chin up,no one ever got to their destination looking at their feet!
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| Re: Esplanade by Wulf |
23-Apr-05/8:55 PM |
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I rather loved this....I am not as experienced a writer and enjoyed the format and rhyme... tok me in for a great visual journey, Thanks...
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| Re: End of Me by sonawrote |
30-Jul-05/11:30 AM |
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اÙآراء اÙعدÙÙ
Ø© اÙÙÙÙ
Ø© ÙÙÙرة تØت اÙسÙÙ
Ùات, I need no arabic lessons.....Sona comes from Arabic for Gold!
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| Re: crying tears by NeeMan |
24-Sep-07/11:30 AM |
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I love it, but here(PR) my opinion never counts for much but to be bashed!I don't care, I love it anyway
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| Re: 'Till Then by sliver |
24-Sep-07/8:50 PM |
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beautifully expressed, thank you for sharing this part of your life with all of us out here
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Oct-07/6:23 AM |
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I love the imadry created in this one....very touching
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| Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable |
19-Oct-07/6:26 AM |
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a sigh and a tear...very heartfelt. Keep writing love
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| Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus! |
19-Oct-07/6:30 AM |
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| Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0 |
19-Oct-07/11:28 AM |
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despite the ongoing comments by other people, I liked this it even made me go read more of your stuff....
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