poemranker ::You Know Not by broken_wing11

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You Know Not

Member since 2004 · Posted 29 Jan 2004 · 1 comment

The way I feel for you Is binding yet unspoken Thinking thoughts of happiness Leaves my tender heart unbroken Knowing who you are And looking in your eyes Is more like gentle sunny days And star lit night skies Thinking of how you've affected me Filled my life with gleam Sacrificing my heart and soul Only your with which to redeem Blessed God in the heavens Blessed soul upon the shore Hoping to be blessed with love For life and evermore You know not of how I feel You know not what I say My emotions mean nothing to you Perhaps safer for me this way Misty eyes are lonely ones But do not belong to me Though you may not know I'll love you eternally

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[9] sonawrote 30-Jan-04/9:06 PM Reply
I like it but feel after 2 readings that there is a small suggestion....add the word time after night in 8th line...flow would be smoother