Re: The Friendship Storm by x0lovelylarnx0	19-Oct-07/11:28 AM
despite the ongoing comments by other people, I liked this it even made me go read more of your stuff....
Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!	19-Oct-07/6:30 AM
not comment worthy....
Re: My Courtney by secretlyvulnerable	19-Oct-07/6:26 AM
a sigh and a tear...very heartfelt. Keep writing love
Re: 'Till Then by sliver	24-Sep-07/8:50 PM
beautifully expressed, thank you for sharing this part of your life with all of us out here
Re: crying tears by NeeMan	24-Sep-07/11:30 AM
I love it, but here(PR) my opinion never counts for much but to be bashed!I don't care, I love it anyway
Re: a comment on End of Me by sonawrote	31-Jul-05/8:05 PM
learning a language is not always by dictated use of a word defined in a dictionary much as in engish a foreigner may not understand why teenage girls call a guy "hot" or "cool" and that the referance is good but cold or burnt is bad..... When I was adopted I inherited a great family,Grandma taught me well and my elders 17:13-17:15 Koran And We have made every man's actions to cling to his neck, and We will bring forth to him on the resurrection day a book which he will find wide open: Read your book; your own self is sufficient as a reckoner against you this day. Whoever goes aright, for his own soul does he go aright; and whoever goes astray, to its detriment only does he go astray: nor can the bearer of a burden bear the burden of another, nor do We chastise until We raise an apostle
Re: End of Me by sonawrote	30-Jul-05/11:30 AM
الآراء العدي٠ة القي٠ة وفيرة تحت السّ٠وات, I need no arabic lessons.....Sona comes from Arabic for Gold!
Re: Esplanade by Wulf	23-Apr-05/8:55 PM
I rather loved this....I am not as experienced a writer and enjoyed the format and rhyme... tok me in for a great visual journey, Thanks...
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	21-Apr-05/9:05 PM
funny how you are so insecure you must proselytize yourself into the belief that I need to alter my appearance..... though my comment referance was to your internal ugliness. To see beyond the surface is one of my abilities, yet one of your inabilities.As far as my intellect, my stats are just fine though I feel no need to brag with numbers.... yet another thing I leave to the unfortunately less esteemed... I write to connect with others and share views... and I feel no reason to bash anyone in the manner which you do. .....For a loser that is so envious of me it cracks me up that you took the time to look up my website....and view only my pictures! The sanctimonious live hollow lives!
Re: a comment on Gaping Hole by sonawrote	20-Apr-05/7:27 PM
A comedian you are not... though you should change your handle to TOAD as without ever seeing your face your ugliness shows quite well
Re: A new leaf by Damien	20-Apr-05/7:20 PM
keep going Damien.....chin up chin up,no one ever got to their destination looking at their feet!
Re: Gaping Hole by sonawrote	20-Apr-05/7:17 PM
I edited the title since some of the MORONS that read here are trying to be comedians.....and doing a pathetic job at it
Re: 15 Minute poem by Damien	18-Apr-05/9:05 PM
Hey Damien, nice piece, have u ever considered stand up in NY? I could set u up w/ some people that would love ya....set u in motion to where u should be already on TV...get in touch ellasona@yahoo.com
Re: Bad grammar and spelling mistakes by Damien	18-Apr-05/9:02 PM
keep it up....I'll always read what u got cummin'
Re: f*ckyouoldmenandyourrules by Damien_	18-Apr-05/8:57 PM
Finally, someone on this site with a brain & talent,the only nasty comments U will get is from those you speak of.....deeply enjoyed this one, you should be doing stand up though.....Def poetry Jam would love you....Ella
Re: Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	2-Apr-04/7:29 PM
nice....
Re: Shower by unouluvme	2-Apr-04/7:26 PM
I give a smirk ....so many of us...
Re: a comment on My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote	8-Feb-04/6:58 PM
thanks, don't know much about structured writing I just write what I feel,but I did what u said, best I could....better?
Re: My heart had a war...no body won by sonawrote	7-Feb-04/10:06 PM
don't care if no one likes this....just had to get this day off my chest....
Re: You Know Not by broken_wing11	30-Jan-04/9:06 PM
I like it but feel after 2 readings that there is a small suggestion....add the word time after night in 8th line...flow would be smoother