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A new leaf (Free verse) by Damien
A large open space with Shadows covering its surface
Vivid images of life slowly starting to flower
The smell of the future with a stench of failure
Whilst hearing the voices of those who tower us
A large open environment with a sense of danger
Lights of life beginning there eternal venture
A whiff of hope within the stench of judgment
Hearing the sound of criticizing minds
A vast open creation with a sense of meaning
Imagery appearing from the depths of the universe
Smell, can you feel the need for life
Especially with that voice bringing you up all the time
A bounder less energy proud to be the universe
Images are not needed as the meaning we rehearse
Smell, what smell, I have no nose
And that voice is so much help to who ever you know
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.4034123
Overall Rank: 3156
Posted: April 20, 2005 3:43 AM PDT; Last modified: April 20, 2005 3:43 AM PDT
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Good luck Goad and Zodiac the critques of the future.