Free verse № 123779
A new leaf
A large open space with Shadows covering its surface
Vivid images of life slowly starting to flower
The smell of the future with a stench of failure
Whilst hearing the voices of those who tower us
A large open environment with a sense of danger
Lights of life beginning there eternal venture
A whiff of hope within the stench of judgment
Hearing the sound of criticizing minds
A vast open creation with a sense of meaning
Imagery appearing from the depths of the universe
Smell, can you feel the need for life
Especially with that voice bringing you up all the time
A bounder less energy proud to be the universe
Images are not needed as the meaning we rehearse
Smell, what smell, I have no nose
And that voice is so much help to who ever you know
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Good luck Goad and Zodiac the critques of the future.
"his thoughts towered my thoughts"
"that building towers the landscape?"
Is that satisfactory.
"boundless" in Line 13
"whoever" in Line 16
I hope you do not mean that you hope this is not understandable. If you do mean that, why did you write it?
The first two verses make sense to me, the last two - I don't know.
Thanks for the time.
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