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ReplyTo a comment on A new leaf by Damien.

Dovina20 Apr 2005

"their" in Line 6.
"boundless" in Line 13
"whoever" in Line 16

I hope you do not mean that you hope this is not understandable. If you do mean that, why did you write it?

The first two verses make sense to me, the last two - I don't know.