Re: a comment on African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}>	22-Oct-03/10:13 AM
Sir Issac Lime Alexander The Grape Little Orphan Orange Poncho Punch Strawberry Shortkook Louie Bloo Raspberry.
Re: African Killer Bees, it's not the smell of smoke by <{Baba^Yaga}>	21-Oct-03/10:58 PM
A ten, blue.
Re: Kites, Gunpowder, and a Chair by Geschäftsreise	15-Oct-03/12:09 PM
Why do I keep believing I might actually find some poetry here?
Re: salt and celibacy by calliope	15-Oct-03/11:56 AM
does a failing libido equal celibacy? Stick to musing.
Re: a comment on For M. B. by Tits	15-Oct-03/11:51 AM
Except me. Poser.
Re: SIR FRASER by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	14-Oct-03/10:43 AM
Dull
Re: The spinning infirmary by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-03/10:24 AM
Great title. You forgot the question mark. I thoroughly agree with your assesment. I'm constantly being transferred between the pysch. ward and cardiology. Why so brief, these poems of yours?
Re: Battle of the brains by INTRANSIT	14-Oct-03/10:19 AM
I keep waivering between the idea of whether or not this should remain so small, or if you should try to write more stanzas for it? I do like it.
Re: Note before work by poetandknowit	14-Oct-03/10:09 AM
Pretty. Would it be better to remove the last 'and'? I like that you placed 'still' before 'against my skin' instead of the obvious ' memory still fresh'. My mind fights to leave it out there. This way there's the possibilty of it always remaining fresh.
Re: Birdcalls by poetandknowit	14-Oct-03/10:03 AM
One of my favorites. I especially love the way the images seem to come and go, they sort of crumble away, one after the other, and all you leave me with is that ultimate thought. The one we always come back to, the one we cannot shake. Lovely, truly.
Re: The Red Tree by raysaun	13-Oct-03/7:03 PM
in the last stanza change 'saw' to 'felt'. Also snowballs can only be made my people, not trees. Find some other way to say it.
Re: conundrum, part 1 by poetekzen	13-Oct-03/7:01 PM
meandering. clever, but only at first.
Re: Forever Tired by Antares42	13-Oct-03/6:58 PM
Boring
Re: sit place by kingit	13-Oct-03/2:17 PM
You're interesting. Do you ever perfom these?(they seem like performance)
Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil	13-Oct-03/2:15 PM
Worth a good re-edit. You have some worthwhile style, but it's sullied with a kind of irresponsibilty. You settle forless than perfect. Also the last 2 lines must have some serious typos, the grammer is incomperhensible.
Re: not quite myself by muted_screams	13-Oct-03/2:12 PM
you forget to explain
Re: thanksgiving by kingit	13-Oct-03/2:09 PM
Now if you could somehow make more sense with "planets I can live"
Re: a comment on thanksgiving by kingit	13-Oct-03/1:58 PM
That's the point my dear.
Re: suicide by durk	13-Oct-03/1:55 PM
Oh sweet Jesus, this site has turned into a craphole for meandering neonates.
Re: Colloid by skaskowski	13-Oct-03/1:51 PM
This is great. What a wonderful idea.