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thanksgiving (Free verse) by kingit
bikini girls 3 frames professionally shot waves in water waves in hair swollen orbs planet eclair but, I am Turkey eating human sandwiches thanks for the misgiving.

Up the ladder: Women
Down the ladder: nicholson

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.2
Weighted score: 5.0238404
Overall Rank: 7405
Posted: October 13, 2003 1:22 PM PDT; Last modified: October 13, 2003 1:22 PM PDT
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[6] god'swife @ 67.73.35.29 | 13-Oct-03/1:27 PM | Reply
clever. Capitalize turkey.
[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 13-Oct-03/1:39 PM | Reply
ha ha ha, don't mention it.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.61.227 | 13-Oct-03/1:48 PM | Reply
I thought about capitalizing, but recind---proper name, country confusion?
[6] god'swife @ 67.73.35.29 > kingit | 13-Oct-03/1:58 PM | Reply
That's the point my dear.
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.61.227 | 13-Oct-03/2:03 PM | Reply
10-4 sweet-stuff, I'm on IT
[n/a] kingit @ 67.69.61.227 | 13-Oct-03/2:05 PM | Reply
Jeez, I think you're right!--the ambiguities!
[6] god'swife @ 67.73.35.29 | 13-Oct-03/2:09 PM | Reply
Now if you could somehow make more sense with "planets I can live"
[7] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 13-Oct-03/5:25 PM | Reply
eenteresting...

very eenteresting....
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