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Battle of the brains (Free verse) by INTRANSIT How do I
render you
more moot,
more mute,
than I ?
Up the ladder:
The 80's
Down the ladder:
Vodka kisses & the final sigh.
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Posted: October 14, 2003 8:54 AM PDT; Last modified: October 14, 2003 8:54 AM PDTWeighted score: 6.7547417 Overall Rank: 456 Comments:
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god'swife @ 67.73.29.151
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14-Oct-03/10:19 AM
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I keep waivering between the idea of whether or not this should remain so small, or if you should try to write more stanzas for it? I do like it.
Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
it is amazing how many meanings "render" has.
I've seen you do alot with alot, and now - alot with a few. cool. This should have a few stanza buddies, I think.
nice
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