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Free verse № 70200

Battle of the brains

by INTRANSIT

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

How do I render you more moot, more mute, than I ?

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[8] god'swife 14-Oct-03/10:19 AM Reply
I keep waivering between the idea of whether or not this should remain so small, or if you should try to write more stanzas for it? I do like it.
[8] Caducus 14-Oct-03/3:29 PM Reply
Wow shorter than a haiku and speaking as loud with less - impressed - maybe we could have a new category called >>>>>>>>> Shorts 8
[8] Shuushin 14-Oct-03/7:34 PM Reply
it is amazing how many meanings "render" has.

I've seen you do alot with alot, and now - alot with a few. cool.

This should have a few stanza buddies, I think.
[n/a] Geschäftsreise 15-Oct-03/10:05 AM Reply
nice